From sprawling ensemble casts to intricate worldbuilding, every story is a web of interconnected threads. I help authors identify what’s working, untangle what isn’t, and weave those threads into a stronger, more compelling narrative.

Untangle the threads.

Reveal the story.

Great stories are webs of interconnected choices, characters, and consequences. Through thoughtful developmental editing, I help authors untangle narrative challenges, strengthen character arcs, and weave complex story threads into compelling, unforgettable narratives.

Whether you're crafting epic fantasy, speculative fiction, or a deeply personal tale, I provide actionable feedback designed to bring clarity, cohesion, and emotional impact to every page.

Weaving Stronger Stories

Developmental Editing

Filters

Full manuscript read

Comprehensive editorial letter

Detailed comments throughout the manuscript

Scene-level feedback

Plot and character analysis

Revision roadmap

One follow-up consultation (30–60 minutes via video or email)

$895.00

Full manuscript read

Comprehensive editorial letter (5–10 pages)

Analysis of:

  • Plot structure

  • Character arcs

  • Pacing

  • Stakes and tension

  • Worldbuilding

  • Theme

  • Market positioning

  • Prioritized revision roadmap

What Is Not Included

  • Line editing

  • Copyediting

  • In-line manuscript comments

$395.00

Review of up to 5,000 words.

In-line comments and reader reactions.

Analysis of hook, pacing, character introduction, and voice.

Recommendations for strengthening the opening.

1–2 page summary of strengths and areas for improvement.

$75.00

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